Jessey's interesting writing

One Spring afternoon, I sat next to the wet sandpit.Suddenly, the wind went flashing past me and onto a tree.I could hear the colourful leaves whispering softly on the brown tree,their leaves opened like a whole spring unfolding in a moment.I went back to the sandpit.”what a disgusting smell I said’’as I looked down, I saw a stinky wet sock,”that was what it is I said’’.I went back to the colourful tree,I could see the leaves rustling,the tree was gorgeous.I sat down beside the tree,I could feel the rough concrete on my pants.Beep!!the bell rung,I walked quickly back to my classroom.

yellow:simple sentences

orange: complex sentences

blue:adverb

green:adjective

light purple:noun